Now that that is closing up we have started on to IHA more updates on this soon i am still brain storming everything and anything for area to work in.
Here is a layout that I did for my writing class. The assignment was to be if our products were to be in next months Design Within Reach's Catalog.
Here is mine.. I made sure that it had some of me in it still ;)
2 comments:
Hi i am so glad to hear that your presentation went well! if they asked to have it for the thesis show i am sure they liked it! this article is a neat assignment! overall this looks great and is nicely worded. but, there is something funny going on with the spacing.
in terms of grammer: there are a few minor changes i would recommend. (this piece follows that styling-i would change to the styling...) and mate finish should be spelled matte. if you choose to use this text in your portfolio-i think it would work nicely-but i would recommend one or two more tweaks to perfect it at that point.
nice personal touch!
looking forward to hearing your housewares concepts!
thanks! when i was working on it the i didn't even see the spacing issue till i got it back yesterday in class! I cant believe that I missed it!
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